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I couldn’t study at all; I had so many things to do. I knew it was going to be the hardest math exam ever. Before leaving to school I saw a package outside of my house. They were finally here, the best pens ever! I had been waiting for them, for a week. I had heard they were amazing, from the comments I had read on amazon. I had to try them out straight away. I quickly grabbed 4 of them and left the rest at home. I got to school and went directly to math class. I took out my pens and I was ready to fail the exam. The teacher gave out the exams. I started to read through it and nothing-made sense. I grabbed my pen to start working. Suddenly I felt different, my hand felt powerful. The pen started writing by itself. In less than 20min I had finish the hour-long exam. I couldn’t believe it. The next day the teacher game the exam back and I got an A+.

The next day I was in English class, the teacher wanted us to write articles, in our notebooks. I had no idea what to write about. I grabbed my pen and an idea came right into me, I was writing about the amazing Bic pens.  I wrote pages and pages my hand couldn’t stop writing.  Next day I had another A+. All my grades were so high thanks to the Bic pens they told me I didn’t need to go to collage anymore. I was too  smart for collage.

That’s when I knew Bic pens are magical.

Hardest decisions of my life.

My birthday was coming up.  My mom asked me what I wanted for my birthday. I never thought that it would be one of the hardest decisions of my life. I wanted a new computer. I was searching for one on amazon, when suddenly I saw a picture of a banana slicer called Hutzler 571 Banana Slicer. I have never seen something so beautiful. I fell in love with it. For the first time I was going to be able to cut my bananas evenly and I wouldn’t have a problem adjusting my mouth every time I had big or small slice of banana.  My mom was only getting me one gift. I knew the banana slicer was going to help me and be a better tool. The computer just had to wait. 

Reflection of Blog

The blog I chose to review was "Top 10 Places to Visit" http://toptenpk.com/top-10-places-to-visit/. It talks about the prettiest landscapes from all around the world.  I chose this blog because one of  my passions is to travel and get to learn different cultures. The top one is the Galapagos Islands it consists of more than 14 islands. The water is clear and the climate is perfect. I believe its a great place to relax and get a tan while you are looking out on an amazing landscape. For a more active vacation you can go hiking in the The Grand Canyon. While hiking you can appreciate the surroundings. I really like how this blog add pictures to show how each place looked. While I was looking at the pictures I wanted to dissolve into them.  I believe any person that looks at this blog will want to go to these places and experience them and search more. The only thing this blog is missing is extra information about the places.

Reflection on my blogs

I started reading all my post. While I was reading them I wanted to correct many things. I believe that when I wrote them I wanted to be finished so quickly that I didn’t check them twice. I have a lot of grammar mistakes. I like my ideas there are not bad, still I can use them better and be more creative.  While reading the post their where many changes I wanted to make especially the post of “Igos personality”. My voice in most of them makes it clear about what I think and believe.  Especially on the post of “Women as Men” I gave my point of view. I believe that when people read it they know how I feel about it. Overall, I need to work on is my grammar and spelling. English is my second language so I still need to learn it better. I need re-read everything more than once.

The post I most enjoy writing was “My holidays”. I really liked it; it gave me a change to express my feeling toward my best holiday. I told people about my traditions, is something I really believe in. When I wrote it I was really exited because is something I really love and look forward every year. When you read it you know that I’m really happy and I enjoy talking about it. It may have a lot of mistakes but I think is one of the only posts I had fun and really wrote what I felt. I still can edit it and make it better.